We are required to critic each blog and weebly website, I'm not good in criticizing each work because i know that each of us had their own interest and weaknesses. Beware don't make it personal.
What's wrong with her blog?,basically the color as a reader i will not interested in the color of the text but instead the contexts of the blog and how will i benefit for it. If this kind of blog i will going to read after i read that context maybe i will feel dizzy, the author used a very much strong color to her blog which is not appropriate to the readers. Next is it better if she can use her own picture instead of using a clip picture and it is better if she can also share some information what is all about her work, what is the thrill of being night class and at the same time a working student.(
This blog contains about the life of the author but the way she deliver her blog make me read and read and read her own story. It is powerful although it only contains a sentence and paragraph but the way she narrate it can catch the readers attention to visit and read her journal. Thumbs UP!
(http://annamarcelang.livejournal.com/)
(http://annamarcelang.livejournal.com/)
This is the first weebly website that i will critic, the way she make her weebly is thru link, she link every information that she had, such as her journal, facebook, you tube and twitter and that why her website is orderly, but maybe it is better if she can post a little clip so that her readers can make interested in clicking her link.(
As i browsed this website he missed to explore the beauty of weebly because his website only contains paragraph and picture maybe it is better if he can use another weebly features just as slideshow then maybe he can change his profile picture to another type of picture he had. (http://jericmansalapus.weebly.com/)









